Thursday, August 22, 2019
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Hi Charlie, my name is Korban and I live in greymouth in the south island. I liked your story about the trip to lake powell. I liked the part when you woke up confused. I thought that this story was a good story. Maybe next time, change the formatting to make it a bit easier to read. Over all I liked this story and found it exciting. From Korban.
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